This week consisted mainly of revising my story - figuring out how to better tell it, while keeping the themes and core of it. After some critique, it was clear that the main character's motivation was not clear enough to the viewers.
Me and my mentor worked to make the story more legible and clean during our weekly meeting. This involved changing the setting, the main character's personality, and more - basically changing everything beyond the core story, of an isolated person's trek to rejoin their friends.
I was able to write out a bullet-point script and make some quick sketches of key scenes I was envisioning, which I'll be fleshing out over the weekend.
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