My main goal this week was ironing out my project's animatic. It was a lot closer to being complete from last week, but there were still a lot of changes to make.
At the suggestion of my mentors and with
other critique, I worked on a few main things. One was to make the two main characters have a clearer relationship in the beginning. The next was to redevelop the 'climbing' portion of the project - which I reinterpreted into a new obstacle. Additionally, I played up the characters' emotions, and made sure to tie everything together at the end in a much more satisfying way.
I also worked a little bit on environment layouts. I made the room layout more interesting, and tried to be a lot more intentional with my shapes and grouping in these sketches after mentor feedback from last week.
In the upcoming week, I'll be working primarily on the room environments and other concept work.
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